Cloud King Poem by lady grace

Cloud King

Rating: 4.9


an emperor from heaven
darken the clear blue sky
scatter and form rainwater
wet the dry emerald eyes…

he is the king among the kings
the ruler in the sky
proud but not arrogant
love.concern is in his eyes…

foliage grows in better place
where sunlight, precipitations are well spread
plant life blooms to its fullest
bush wood grows its best…

cloud king as what we call him
the name commended in the crowd
the winner himself, the champion he is
in painting he was so proud..


(this is for adean, a science camp winner ”comic strip”…..my son, .am so proud of you even if father is not with us anymore, he sees you from heaven.we all love you happy birthday on july 31..)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I now how jubilant you must feel Grace with this touching poem. His expression of art and yours as a proud mother seeps through the poem with so much love. Simple beautiful. 10 Karin Anderson

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Carl Harris 26 July 2009

This is a very beautiful and graceful poem tribute to your son, Lady Grace. it is most wonderfully expressed in every verse and was a pleasure to read. Carl.

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Alf Hutchison 26 July 2009

LG a beautiful tribute to your son... wish him God's richest blessings on his birthday from me... regards Alf

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The Dreamer 26 July 2009

God Bless you both and you will always be looked over - take care

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DaNa XxX 27 July 2009

that was very nice..! ! ! and touching..! ! God bless you both you and your son..! and let him always be a reason for your proudness...! ! ^__^

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Roland Bastien 13 August 2009

I felt floating like a cloud when I read that poem....magic-

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Chris Mendros 04 August 2009

Touching tribute to an undoubtedly fine and gifted son. Mournful but proud, expressing emotions difficult to serve with mere words. Well done.

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Ken E Hall 02 August 2009

What a nice way to give a tribute to your son with a blessing from heaven for that is what your poem is and to add 3 letters to your name ful, graceful ++++++10 regards

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Rafique Farooqi 31 July 2009

Very very beautiful...write.........Grace......... Thunderclap in the silence....xinia

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Aijaz Asif 31 July 2009

another marvelous write from you ma'am and a very beautiful gift a true gift indeed which can never be forgotten and always be remembered....thanks for sharing 10++++ rgds asif

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