Kelly Seale

Rookie (12-17-1958 / Norfolk, Va. USA)

'Cloud Nine'


Oh, what fluffy cloud are you on, floating sky high... wonder what dreams may come,
as I began to cry.
And now the rain.
I wish I was on cloud nine with you.
Now you're head is spinning, your face all flush-
Being on cloud nine is such
A rush!

Submitted: Tuesday, August 07, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, August 08, 2012

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  • Rookie - 936 Points Unwritten Soul (8/27/2012 2:09:00 AM)

    Dont worry let the rain fall we will keep moving to another cloud nine via rainbow junction maybe we may found a new cloud nice plus one....cloud ten hahahaha...so keep positive..._Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kelly Seale (8/22/2012 2:17:00 AM)

    Karen, Your own dreams of Love are dreams come true with you son and his girlfriend, reliving and reinventing love constantly. Thank you for such warm reviews! ; -)
    -Kelly. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (8/20/2012 3:30:00 AM)

    A lovely write which i understand so well watching my young son and his girlfriend play-fighting and doting, immediately reminds me of when i was enjoying the exuberance of young love..never ceases to make me smile....tyvm karen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kelly Seale (8/18/2012 10:43:00 PM)

    (Smiles) Thank you so much Meena! I am so glad this piece has touched you also.; -)
    -Kelly. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kelly Seale (8/18/2012 9:08:00 PM)

    Thank you all! Betty Bolden! ; -) Nilakshi Nath! ; -) Marcus Mckinley! : -) Amy Marie! ; -) and Stevie Taite! ; -)
    You all have no idea what it means to me to be read and my words enjoyed and touched by so many!
    -Kelly. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Amy Marie (8/18/2012 1:50:00 PM)

    Very true. It can be hard seeing people so happy when you're not happy... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stevie Taite (8/18/2012 3:02:00 AM)

    I have read it and read it! I love the way it reads. To me, I will read it again when my children leave home for college, or on a travel adventure or get married. I will remember what it was like when I moved on and grew up. Happy rain. Hope I don't offend by interpreting it this way? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kelly Seale (8/12/2012 8:38:00 AM)

    Thank You Elena, Never let go of your dreams, they will inspire you and sustain you when all else fails. I'm so glad you enjoyed this one, and that you have been touched by my words. It means the world to me! ; -)
    -Kelly. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,151 Points Elena Sandu (8/9/2012 6:59:00 PM)

    I know numbers could be found in anything yet the only thing I wouldn't think to put a number on would be the clouds and the wind. Intriguing, original poem. The freedom of the cloud (free spirit) in my vision is a bit sad. Good poem, I keep dreaming on, thank you for share. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kelly Seale (8/9/2012 8:24:00 AM)

    (Smiles): -) Thank you Unwritten Soul, my inspiration was a challenge from a fellow poet who made me fly to the heavens!
    -Kelly. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 936 Points Unwritten Soul (8/9/2012 8:07:00 AM)

    Oh cloud nine, swimming around the crescent moon tonight,
    Amusing calm, Shimmering light shadows bright to the dark,
    On clouds, over excitement nine angel play the fire spark
    singing lullaby sending fallen star to dears wishing sleep well, good night
    Cloud nine+1...your poem make it a new meaning of cloud ten... :) _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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