Cloudy Sunset.........[weather; Change; Personal? ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Cloudy Sunset.........[weather; Change; Personal? ]

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Glancing out our western window, toward the Ocean beyond some hills,
I see, near sundown, a layering of assorted clouds, like alternating color spills;
shades of gray this November day, plus white, and some almost resembling amber.
It makes me imagine a playing field over which winged-angels might clamber.

I took some photos to show my wife and now the scene has changed.
A dark gray streak is beside one forest-fire orange. Clouds are also rearranged.
As more time passes, whatever remnants there were of blue sky disappear,
and light and dark grays and almost-white stand alone……, as sunset is quite near.


(Nov.2012)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
it is true. sometimes i like to offer a short poem, a poem without humor, a poem without references to horror or sex or problems or myself (which is difficult because a poem without any reference to me IS boring, don't you agree? oh, i see now that i failed this time as i did use the pronoun 'I'.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Quoth Theraven 04 October 2020

Bri, Inclusion.., not a sin. Sometimes the I's have it. QtR

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Valsa George 27 February 2016

A beautiful poem on near sunset. Like that of an expert photographer, your eyes have captured the scene in all its loveliness, and you perpetuated the image through your camera lens! A celestial scene where you imagine angels of heaven clambering around! Though lacking your usual humorous air, it has a special beauty!

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George Bernard-bloody-shaw 07 December 2012

Clouds...sky...different colours, shapes, shades. I love clouds. And a very descriptive poem. I hope your wife liked the photos. George

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