Mohammed Hassan (Piracy In The Mediterranean)

Rookie (3/3/1990 / Al Iskandarī yah)

Cold Iron Holes - Poem by Mohammed Hassan (Piracy In The Mediterranean)

choose your way this is the part ways
are you ready to choose your way?
never matters what they said
this is the roses discussion dream

against the poison effect work again
hypocrisy isn't seductive to me
eternity tempting my tale to die
waterfalls in disguise for the incomplete

cursed sword through astray soul
holy blood sweats into poisoned blood
the ice is melting turning into salt
the rest of the virginal civilised ruins

one hour left and the angels will come
to take the orders from the master
bloody tall wings in animations
what is the truth and what is the wrong?

these broken rays of light
are crying for it's break
these highs and lows
are trying to get straight
these are the shattered glass
it was one piece as once
these unseen mirrors
have nothing to reflect

living without a dream
living in that world alone
living without a reason
living in these cold iron holes

perhaps
I will
rest in peace or never
in the
meadows
of paradise forever


Comments about Cold Iron Holes by Mohammed Hassan (Piracy In The Mediterranean)

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/13/2009 5:53:00 PM)

    living without a dream
    living in that world alone
    living without a reason
    living in these cold iron holes
    perhaps
    I will
    rest in peace or never
    in the
    meadows
    of paradise forev..........................what an real imagination and fact of life...what is use of life without any purpose.....lovely poem with great message for mankind....10

    read mine.....rest in peace...pledge.....whould we die....no where to go (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie true Little angel ...! ! ! (10/12/2009 5:51:00 PM)

    (holy blood) (ice) (broken lights) (bloody wings) .. oh.. what picture you drew... morbidly beautiful... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 372 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (10/11/2009 5:22:00 PM)

    Interesting piece of work. enjoyed reading it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (10/11/2009 11:46:00 AM)

    wonderful touching poem..........well done! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Omar Ibrahim (10/9/2009 3:31:00 AM)

    i like the light that cries because it is broken.....i liked this expression.....and many other expressions.....your dictionary is full of words....keep using them.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 67 Points The Lost.. (10/8/2009 12:19:00 PM)

    living without a dream
    living in that world alone
    living without a reason
    living in these cold iron holes
    perhaps
    I will
    rest in peace or never
    in the
    meadows
    of paradise forever

    this is wonderfull...keep up the good work :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mubeen Sadhika (10/8/2009 9:06:00 AM)

    Sensational piece. Nicely written. Beautiful narration. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Obinna Eruchie (10/8/2009 8:44:00 AM)

    Interesting piece with emotional lines such as these, 'these broken rays of light / are crying for it's break / these highs and lows / are trying to get straight / these are the shattered glass / it was one piece as once / these unseen mirrors / have nothing to reflect...' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Abdul Athani (10/8/2009 6:44:00 AM)

    its a very touching poems from a young poet i admire your work10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (10/8/2009 3:10:00 AM)

    hat is a so touching poem with deep meanings..it seems my friends some of the hidden rats reached you and rate you 5..this poem deserve ten................ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (10/8/2009 2:44:00 AM)

    all ideas are finely merged to form a theme/nice (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 8, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 30, 2011


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