Cold Iron Holes Poem by Mohammed Hassan (Piracy In The Mediterranean)

Cold Iron Holes

Rating: 3.8


choose your way this is the part ways
are you ready to choose your way?
never matters what they said
this is the roses discussion dream

against the poison effect work again
hypocrisy isn't seductive to me
eternity tempting my tale to die
waterfalls in disguise for the incomplete

cursed sword through astray soul
holy blood sweats into poisoned blood
the ice is melting turning into salt
the rest of the virginal civilised ruins

one hour left and the angels will come
to take the orders from the master
bloody tall wings in animations
what is the truth and what is the wrong?

these broken rays of light
are crying for it's break
these highs and lows
are trying to get straight
these are the shattered glass
it was one piece as once
these unseen mirrors
have nothing to reflect

living without a dream
living in that world alone
living without a reason
living in these cold iron holes

perhaps
I will
rest in peace or never
in the
meadows
of paradise forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

hat is a so touching poem with deep meanings..it seems my friends some of the hidden rats reached you and rate you 5..this poem deserve ten................

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Abdul Athani 08 October 2009

its a very touching poems from a young poet i admire your work10+++

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Obinna Eruchie 08 October 2009

Interesting piece with emotional lines such as these, 'these broken rays of light / are crying for it's break / these highs and lows / are trying to get straight / these are the shattered glass / it was one piece as once / these unseen mirrors / have nothing to reflect...'

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Mubeen Sadhika 08 October 2009

Sensational piece. Nicely written. Beautiful narration. Well done.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 October 2009

living without a dream living in that world alone living without a reason living in these cold iron holes perhaps I will rest in peace or never in the meadows of paradise forev..........................what an real imagination and fact of life...what is use of life without any purpose.....lovely poem with great message for mankind....10 read mine.....rest in peace...pledge.....whould we die....no where to go

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 11 October 2009

Interesting piece of work. enjoyed reading it!

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Catrina Heart 11 October 2009

wonderful touching poem..........well done! ! !

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Omar Ibrahim 09 October 2009

i like the light that cries because it is broken.....i liked this expression.....and many other expressions.....your dictionary is full of words....keep using them..

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The Lost.. 08 October 2009

living without a dream living in that world alone living without a reason living in these cold iron holes perhaps I will rest in peace or never in the meadows of paradise forever this is wonderfull...keep up the good work :)

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