Coldness Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
Coldness
The glimpse of dark night shivered and overwhelmed
Lightning like a splash of fire fiercely terrorized
Mountainous valley retreated and succumbed
Oak and maple homes enlightened with animosity
Iced soaked rains weren’t the worst nightmare
Mean rivers were numbed and cold
Rigid and passive vehicles
Strolling along the icy roads with courage
Defeated throughout the night of chilled coldness
Icebreaker should have done the jobs
But the sub zero will frozen you
Before you could heat up the machine
Interpreted into deformation
Froze bites will drive you into illusions
Something eloped of appreciation
Coldness is madness
Fragile and dumbness
Evolutes into a white wilderness
You have a great imagination i flowed with it since i am soo cold at this moment it was great!
Great job Sulaiman! I feel the chill and can see your talent in black and white! I was drawn to the title because I wanted to see what you had to say about being cold or if it was just a symbol of something else..... Great imagery throughout! Take care of U Shelley
Thanks a lot and Sulaiman you are an imaginative poet, liked your work.
Winter shivers described perfectly. Thank You Sulaiman.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/16/2024 7:08:58 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Excellent imagery. Your poem is winter white. Ten without hesitation. Warm regards, Sandra