Coldness Poem by Adrian Ivashkov

Coldness



coldness engolfs his heart
blocking feeling of dispair
from breaking the already fragile heart
coldness blocking feeling from her heart
changing her to the world
it was the world that froze their hearts
and made them what they are
but it is there connection
that will once again break the ice
once that day comes
they will feel once more
never again will the coldness creep...
back into their hearts

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Little Cat 01 April 2010

I really like the poem, but the typo bugs me. 'i weas the world that froze their hearts'. 'weas' is not a word~! : P

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