Collecting Rain Checks Poem by Brian Hinckley

Collecting Rain Checks



The halls echo my footfalls,
shattering the silence around me.
I feel the cool air rush in from the door opening,
but I look up and you're not there.

I check my phone,
but no missed calls.
I look outside for you,
but find only blowing leaves.

Dejected for a moment,
I open the doors and step outside.
The brisk October wind flows around me,
bringing a smile to my lips.

I look up at the barren trees,
watching them wave to me as I walk.
I smile back at them as you call,
my smile widening into pure happiness.

You apologize for missing me again;
again I say it's no problem.
We make plans for the next day,
but I know that they are tenuous at best.

I still smile as the rain begins to fall,
enjoying the cat and mouse aspect of our lives.
You don't know what to make of me,
yet you catch yourself smiling as well.

I gather this rain check,
stashing it with all the others.
I will collect on them someday,
and make up tenfold for lost time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuck Audette 24 October 2008

In the meantime, your apartment has been robbed... haha, just kidding. I like the imagery to this poem, and your optimism! -chuck

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Brian Hinckley

Brian Hinckley

Buffalo, New York
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