College: Venice Poem by Brian Johnston

College: Venice



First lightning, then moon calm mingles
with her lights, glistens from the fingers
of salt water, as if jewels rested there;
Jewels (untouched by velvet display)
slipped upon the sea's extended hand.

Illumined in this light lie dwellings, dreams
of a thousand years, settling down…
fading, as if nature now
regrets these long fragile waters
men soil wantonly.

Yet, for a moment, the city stands defiant,
buoyant, sky-embracing,
willed aloft by those
who rose with her, ah…
from the sea, the sea.

Thursday, November 21, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: Travel
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Brian Johnston
About 1966

Written in Venice while on my way home from the Peace Corps in Tanzania. This poem won an Honorable Mention in an Oklahoma State Poetry Contest whil I was in college at Oklahoma University.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 19 June 2016

was that honorable mention or horrible mention? just asking! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Gajanan Mishra 09 April 2014

first lightning, first love, never to forget. good one.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 25 January 2014

Illumined in this light lie dwellings, dreams of a thousand years, settling down… Impression of Venice is beautifully expressed. Your poem has real power of expression.

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