Color Cannot Survive Poem by Sandra Fowler

Color Cannot Survive

Rating: 5.0


The world is locked behind fringed window blinds.
Quiet monotones destabilize sunset.
Color cannot survive this faltering warmth.
I suffer shadows gladly for your sake.

Your handsome touch intangible as smoke
Paints dusk into the corners of my mind.
Fingers brush snow into my consciousness.
Let us compare frost pictures for an hour.

Previously published; Voices Israel

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Nagy 02 April 2006

Oh, this really is wonderful Sandra! I love the line about gladly suffering shadows for his sake! Very nice. Sincerely, Mary

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Christine K. Trease 05 April 2006

This is vividly written and evokes images to mind that are amazing. Thank you for sharing this with the world!

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Will Barber 01 May 2006

Wonderful imagery, beautiful and intelligent - what can I say? You know already it is superb - my favorite so far, and I'm up to number 10.

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Aisha Sherazi 09 June 2006

Complete and utter poetry. You weave words like silken cloth Sandra. Peace, Aisha

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Anjana Aravind 14 August 2006

Wonderful imagery. Great poem. Anjana

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Sally Plumb Plumb 08 September 2009

Rainbows dissappear, too.I must wait till the next one.

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premji premji 11 May 2009

Fingers brush snow into my consciousness. sandraji, the above line sends chill one my spinal code.........

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Mary Naylor 31 December 2008

I found the imagery fragile and awesome at the same time. The intimacy of the tactile sense came through very strongly for me - fingers brush snow into my consciousness as did the gentle irony of the closing line. A beautiful and complex poem!

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Kesav Easwaran 30 November 2008

the setting colors of memories too have a beauty of their own but they won't survive long merging into the darkening shadows that fall on the mind's window blinds...you create a sad but sweet poetic atmosphere with your soft imageries, Sandra...well wrtten piece...10

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Alison Cassidy 22 November 2007

For 27 years I lived with a man who always kept the curtains drawn. I fancied he must have been a mole in a previous life. In summer, his excuse was to keep the heat out. In winter, to keep the heat in. For some reason this poem reminds me of this man and his fear of life and the warmth and loyalty of his friendship and the brilliance of his mind. I was happy to 'suffer shadows gladly for (his) sake.' Your melancholy is always written with such warmth Sandra. This one touched me especially. love, Allie xxxx

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W. Columbia, WV, USA
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