Color Of Togetherness Poem by Dorsey Baker

Color Of Togetherness

Rating: 4.2


Colors of the universe
seem to be blending
old wounds
slowly mending
the moon
seems to be getting bigger
every night
flooding us
with its mystic light
way out in the distance
the stars
suddenly
start to appear
although
millions of miles
away
they seem so near
night becomes day
a beautiful
morning has arrived!

Monday, February 25, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 12 March 2019

Even in this changing world unity is strength. With love and cooperation we can live happily. Nature reflects beautiful light. This is very interesting. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned.10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 March 2019

A marvelous poem of the day. Congrats dear Ma'am Dorsey for being selected....10+++++++++++

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Castellenas John 12 March 2019

Wonderful use of words. The poetry was magic.

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Rajnish Manga 12 March 2019

You have drawn a very fascinating landscape on earth based on the changes caused by the movement of heavenly bodies in the sky. Thanks & Congrats, Dorsey Baker.

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Prabir Gayen 12 March 2019

Beautiful poem dear poet. ....... thanks

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Chinedu Dike 01 October 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Benjamin Uy 21 March 2019

Its mystic lights suddenly seems to appear Nights becomes morning becomes day A great thoughtful poem a a A+

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 March 2019

very sublime and beautiful verse i have now read first glad you have poetic acumen of composing in metaphorical verse now read my poems you may MOM'S SMILES you have tears coming your way as ur a poet all here say

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Khairul Ahsan 12 March 2019

Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'! The title is nice, so is the poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 March 2019

beautifully written- every night flooding us with its mystic light///

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