Colorful Bubbles! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

This situation of dilemma is prevalent in everyone's life. You have used metaphor bubbles to represent them perfectly.10

I don't know what happened in the past but I know it's better to forget the past. You have already put your first steps on the ladder of present, but I am not looking at you. I am looking at the top and that's your future. Continue your journey of life with full confidence that a lovely bright future is ahead of you. By the way the poem on pain is an outstanding poem.

Inspirational and nicely penned. Thank you, Geetha

Often it is difficult to disentangle from the web of the past and I too often find myself as a victim of it. But as Susan says, it is important that we concentrate on the present so that we can arrive at a better future. Outstanding write!

Very tender and sensitive poem on emotions that hit us all. Finding a path is as hard as walking upon it and our doubts always dog us. You expressed it so well. Welcome to Poemhunter again. So good to read your heartfelt poetry.

Pain shrinks in to drop of tears. Soaking and rinse the bubbles of past in wise mind that makes up for washing pain. This pain we wash while we rise towards God with beloved mind make up. This poem is Very amazingly penned...10

Ladder of life goes from past into the future. Maybe present is just the step one places on the ladder. A thoughtful poem.

Marvellous. speaks to the heart. Speaks for a lot of us. We dwell on the past though it gives pain. We all need to live in the moment. The feeling of being stuck in the past is beautifully expressed through this succinct gem of a piece.

It is difficult to extricate oneself from the haunting memories of the past....! But we have to somehow learn to forget the past and try to live in the present......! Like bubbles, we should allow the past to burst in us!

Am I going to soak and rinse in bubbles of past I know not where I am going right now for sure! Yes life is always uncerain.We cling to known and secured terrains of past.We have to keep faith in ourselves and concentrate in the present.Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.