Colour Me Love. Poem by Fay Slimm

Colour Me Love.

Rating: 5.0


Colour me bubbles of misty-blue love.
Blow them, drifting on soundless high cloud.
I wait here, gratefully searching above
The whispering sky, knowing the ether around
My window pane will resound once again
To more heart-warming secrets, hauntingly
Packaged in words wrapped in your name.
Containing nothing but sweet love-reports.

Colour me baubles of glistening gems.
Rubies for hugs, emeralds for evergreen
Promise of undying affection - - bend
Them like rainbowing arrows, gleaming
Their star-studded aerial journey, straight
Into my dreams. Colour me gently, doves
White as moonlight, to sing in the gateway
Of my heart. Starting soon, colour me love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kris Smith 15 December 2008

My friend this is one of the most stunning pieces of verse I have read in a long time, to my eyes it brings delight 10 ++++ Chris

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 15 December 2008

Love colours our world, when in love how brighter our world.. Andy 10

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Kevin Eaglesfield 15 December 2008

Awesome, Fay.Beautiful.I won't see the slate skies tomorrow, I'll see your words and what they do.Kev xx

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Kevin Wells 27 December 2008

Beautiful and masterfully evocative. Typical 'Fay'.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 26 December 2008

Th exodus of my love will shower your brightly color of love.Beautiful writes Fay.I'll read more of yours soon.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 23 December 2008

This has a great imagery. Especially the second stanza is versatile, superb composition.

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Karen Clements 21 December 2008

What a beautiful verse, simply stunning! ! You are trully wonderful x

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I been blown away. as a matter of fact. this still got me floating.. I love it

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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