Amy Kerswell

Rookie - 0 Points (04 06 1987 / Bath UK)

Colours Of Pain - Poem by Amy Kerswell

Red deep and red angry red.
For her eyes only see the anger thats around her.
Blue for the thousands of tears cried.
Black for the despair and depression life brings her way.

Red is all she sees.
For the anger that fills her within.
Anger that has lived for so long.
While she trys to figure where it went wrong.

Blue for the tears.
Tears that will not fall.
There no water fall.

Blak for the dispare and depression.
That life has brought her way.


Comments about Colours Of Pain by Amy Kerswell

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (11/17/2016 5:39:00 PM)


    Red, black and blue.......
    You can turn them into pink......
    Congrats for being selected for the day......
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  • (11/17/2016 3:13:00 PM)


    Anger that has lived for so long.
    While she trys to figure where it went wrong.- beautiful poem -voted 10
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  • (11/17/2016 8:17:00 AM)


    Energy of emotions specially the negative ones is very intense and fierce. You have a too in your hands to turn it around in right direction. It is expressed so wonderfully. Congratulations for member poem place. (Report) Reply

  • Clarence Prince (11/17/2016 7:59:00 AM)


    Red is all she sees,
    For the anger that fills her within,
    Anger that has lived for so long.
    To rid of those sorts of anger,
    one has to forgive and forget,
    and move on!
    Thanks for sharing!
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  • Indira Renganathan (11/17/2016 5:25:00 AM)


    To be wise is to think about how to get over or to divert oneself towards something pleasant...there are lots of such things in this world like nature, , music e.t.c for us to study...why to cry over spilt milk....above all pain is a lesson for us to learn about life too....God bless you- 10 (Report) Reply

  • The Princess (11/17/2016 5:20:00 AM)

    color
    A very good description of colors that describe pain and suffering. Congrats on being poem of day! (Report) Reply

  • Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (11/17/2016 1:37:00 AM)

    Colours of Pain
    A very thought provoking poem Amy.Congrats on being member of the day.
    Col Muhammad KhalidKhan
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (11/17/2016 1:21:00 AM)

    Love and pain
    Life and pain! ! Depression! But still with hope. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Robert Murray Smith (11/17/2016 12:39:00 AM)

    Colours Of Pain
    Amy,
    This is a very insightful poem. Only with insight is there a full recovery from pain of this type. You are well on the way. Don't look back, forget negativity in life, and move forward singing positivity. +++10

    Poetry is the way to go forward. Try to write about nature, and love.

    Robert
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  • Liza Sudina (11/17/2016 12:15:00 AM)


    Amy, this is a crying poem of pain.
    But behind all pain - we once would find and feel one color of Love - white. Cheer up!
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 13, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 25, 2010


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