Khairul Ahsan


Come Home Darling - Poem by Khairul Ahsan

It's been long since you've gone.
Though we chat, regularly somewhat,
See you on Skype, every night,
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Comments about Come Home Darling by Khairul Ahsan

  • Rookie Megan Russell (4/26/2015 10:18:00 PM)

    I liked this poem a lot! Do you write from experience? Or imagination? The final paragraph brings it all together nicely. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 7,763 Points Khairul Ahsan (5/23/2014 10:46:00 PM)

    @Ruma Chaudhuri
    I am also touched by your generous comment on my poem.
    Thanks for understanding, thanks for appreciating.
    Much inspired, much obliged,
    Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,763 Points Khairul Ahsan (5/23/2014 10:33:00 PM)

    @Evelina Kononenko ~
    Thanks for appreciating the emotion in the poem. I am much inspired. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 553 Points Ruma Chaudhuri (5/20/2014 3:12:00 AM)

    Its very much emotional poem. Touchy as well as nice poem. I really like the poem. It can touch anybody's heart easily. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - -1 Points ~ Evelina Kononenko ~ (5/12/2014 11:43:00 AM)

    wow this has so much emotion! I really love this one :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,763 Points Khairul Ahsan (5/8/2014 1:15:00 PM)

    @ Chris G. Vaillancourt
    I am glad to have your comment. I am inspired. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 297 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/8/2014 11:20:00 AM)

    Very touching. Well done (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,763 Points Khairul Ahsan (4/8/2014 7:09:00 AM)

    @Amitava Sur
    Thanks for understanding and appreciating the 'Intense longing of love' in the poem. I am glad and inspired. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,631 Points Amitava Sur (2/14/2014 5:42:00 AM)

    Intense longing of love and lust was expressed here with vivid details.... loved it (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,763 Points Khairul Ahsan (11/23/2013 10:18:00 AM)

    @ Beauteous Victory,
    Thank you very much for your nice words.
    Such nice words of appreciation fills my heart with joy. Thanks for giving me the much needed joy! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,763 Points Khairul Ahsan (11/14/2013 6:29:00 AM)

    @ Naida Nepascua Supnet,
    Thanks for agreeing to the emotions expressed in the poem. Physical presence cannot be replaced by the virtual ones. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 276 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (10/21/2013 6:02:00 PM)

    You talk of many couples afar but still making it through. Constant talking is not enough, never be enough. It will not suffice the presence needed.
    Ah, as always, very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,763 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/12/2013 11:31:00 PM)

    @ Aqua Flower,
    I am so glad you liked it! Thanks for the kind words. I am inspired. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,763 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/9/2013 10:30:00 PM)

    @Samantha,
    Yes, it is passionate. The poem was written with the feelings of separation when my love was on a tour of duty, away from home, for not too long (yet it was unbearable) .
    Thanks for sharing your sad feelings with me. It makes me feel I was able to communicate. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,763 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/9/2013 10:24:00 PM)

    @Sandra Feldman,
    Yes, the fire of desire, to be with your love and to make love is overwhelming, all engulfing.
    I cannot thank you enough for your second line. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Samanthia Moore (8/9/2013 2:13:00 PM)

    Soooo im sitting here in tears this made me sad. This is what happens when i read something emotional. This really got to me but i will be ok. But it is a fantastic poem. Love it. Its so passionate. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,954 Points Sandra Feldman (7/29/2013 10:36:00 PM)

    Might we say, the fire of desire, very passionate, indeed. You are an amazing poet. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,763 Points Khairul Ahsan (7/9/2013 8:12:00 PM)

    Thanks, Heather, for coming on board. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,763 Points Khairul Ahsan (7/9/2013 8:10:00 PM)

    Thanks, Christina, for reading my poem and making your comment. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,802 Points Heather Wilkins (7/9/2013 1:52:00 PM)

    every emotional and pleading. a need to be fulfilled. good work (Report) Reply










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