Come On Dear Clouds Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Come On Dear Clouds

Rating: 4.9


It’s too hot, could you come as a rainy spout!
The heat inside now shrieks for outing,
The music of steps I can feel, I breathe-in you,
And what I inhale is shivering my body,
I know you are dancing somewhere very close,
Humid air that is wet, murmuring a song,
A lyric that is sung after meeting the beloved
Although I can listen to your slow heart beats,
But now I want a thunder of passion,
Lightning of sex that excites someone,
She is still sleeping in a tiring noon,
Shake her up and wake her up,
Inspire me to sing, and excite her to dance,
I want to see your show of romance,
See the smile that will follow the cries,
Come on dear clouds and capture the skies.

Come On Dear Clouds
Wednesday, March 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: rainy season
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalida Bano Ali 25 March 2015

Sweet, very sweet poem.................10

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Cigeng Zhang 01 April 2015

A beautiful poem.A poet always wonders what lies beyond the clouds.

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Khalid Saifullah 29 March 2015

An amazing poem................................10

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Hazel Durham 26 March 2015

A stunning write full of passion as you wait for the beloved rain to release the tension of the humidity that drains your heart and soul!

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Valsa George 26 March 2015

Yes, it is too hot and humid! We all look for the rain! It is lurching some where close, but stays eluding like a shy lover! Let it thunder down with passion! I agree with Mark.... great metaphor!

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Mark Heathcote 25 March 2015

I love metaphor it deserves more than one read so I read it 3 times lovely.

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