'Come Quietly' Poem by seema gupta

'Come Quietly'

Rating: 5.0


When the sun might be diffused
Be seized and red in the sky
A soft wind gust
Scattered to touch your hair

Edge of the moon is shining
Even the stars to wake sleeping
doors chain quitely
Be hiding in the arms of sleep
Roaming stray pieces of cloud
Become gatekeepers turns cautious
Hiding in solitude
I will opened the door of heart
You come quietly
peeping in my eyes
to live Ages in a singal moment

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 05 December 2009

Edge of the moon is shining Even the stars to wake sleeping doors chain quitely Be hiding in the arms of sleep................................. quest of spumes riffles by shining moon floats in air to delve mirth from hued blue at times passion peeks into room of reason lest jingle may calling from mango grove..................utterly inspiring, yet passionate, wrought ingenious by imagery,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Afzal Shauq 05 December 2009

I will opened the door of heart You come quietly peeping in my eyes to live Ages in a singal moment a sweet and very meaningful poem with rich idea and expression is very much poetic too..well done 10/10

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