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Unwritten Soul


Come to Me (Like The Evening Breeze)


Come to my life
Like an evening wind
Lingers me a soft touch
In every moves of its sway
Breathe me out from dismay
A bliss has lighting spark in soul
As much as it does cares my heart
Returning the flame once it was gone
Like an evening wind
You touched me

Dont be afraid
If i am not here these days
I will be back someday to you
Till then let the moon be the land
Where our eyes meet at nights
Remind our hearts to know
Our soul still the same
Never change

You've touched my life
Like the evening breeze
Where destiny lend me you
That swaying our hearts blue
A bliss has sparking light my soul
As much as it does cares my heart
Returning the flame once it was gone
Like an evening wind
You are to my soul

Like the evening breeze we go
Touch our hearts with a soul
Like the evening breeze
That's how you touch my soul
Like the evening breeze
If you feel
You'll see

Submitted: Monday, May 13, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, May 14, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

I did this write, for a song called Evening Breeze where when the idea comes to me i wanted to make a song with the wind blow sounds as an intro and to end this song. This write has personal value, i record this song and sang it, my very first complete whole song i ever did...i really like the evening breeze...i feel my soul in it hahahhaa...just another simple poem, hope you smile along the words_Soul
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(Sound of wind blows)

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  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/17/2013 6:25:00 AM)

    Like an Evening Breeze, this song had touched my heart,
    What can be more beautiful, when we are blessed with such beautiful Evening Breeze..
    And which touched your soul, and a fantastic song is flowing out....

    Lovely write...Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Nassy Fesharaki (6/8/2013 10:09:00 PM)

    I like your breaking points, diagonals and then, trunks that keep the pine tree shape firm. I have many poems like that, half of the tree, half of the house, then the column, tunk and foundation... (Report) Reply

  • Captain Cur (5/30/2013 7:44:00 AM)

    Beautiful ending to a spectacularly pretty poem.
    Loved the melody and the words. (Report) Reply

  • Spiritual Seeker (5/29/2013 1:17:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem...as cool as the evening breeze! Pure honey will stay sweet...though many years kept, the healing stays. Excellent poem, thanks for sharing again. (Report) Reply

  • Kee Thampi (5/28/2013 11:07:00 AM)

    I like this poem.....
    That's how you touch my soul
    Like the evening breeze (Report) Reply

  • Cosmic Dreamer (5/25/2013 4:18:00 AM)

    Just when I think I can spill my emotions upon the page with such beauty, I read your words and realise... I still have some work to do... Keep them coming my friend... (Report) Reply

  • Anthony Di''anno (5/19/2013 3:36:00 AM)

    Lovely. It floats on a warm love. The evening breeze in North Yorkshire doesn't quite match the gentle balminess of yours right now Soul. I enjoyed your poem. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri (5/16/2013 11:26:00 AM)

    superb.the poem is full of hope and light and song is also cute especially the sound of wind.creative and cute.as the whole poem flows.~nb (Report) Reply

  • Poetheart Morgan (5/16/2013 11:05:00 AM)

    I liked it very much better with you singing! ! ! ! The music, the lyrics, loved so much. That is Soul! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Farah Ilyas (5/15/2013 11:47:00 AM)

    You've touched my life
    Like the evening breeze
    Where destiny lend me you
    That swaying our hearts blue...

    nice flow of poem as well as of song is just due to deep love, sentiments, feelings & emotions you have put in the composition

    Like the evening breeze we go
    Touch our hearts with a soul
    Like the evening breeze
    That's how you touch my soul
    Like the evening breeze
    If you feel
    You'll see..

    one divine supremacy of love is, you wouldn't be alone even in solitude at all.....great one (Report) Reply

  • Thomas A Robinson (5/14/2013 9:29:00 AM)

    I have been fortunate to have heard the song. But the poem stands on it's own on solid rock.
    A quite soothing poem. One of eventuality where all hope lies in a dream worth waiting for. Another step
    forward, bravo! (Report) Reply

  • Jahan Zeb (5/14/2013 7:27:00 AM)

    Nice song. I would love to hear that but I know you would not send me that. (Report) Reply

  • Paul Brookes (5/14/2013 2:22:00 AM)

    The wind carries your words and gently settles on my soul. Beautiful poem brought a tear to my eye. BB : O)) (Report) Reply

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