Come To Reality Mother Poem by demi buxton

Come To Reality Mother

Rating: 4.0


your drinking booze
with your gay dudes
taken drugs with those
dirty little bugs

when your taken pills
it mounts up to bills

your familys sitting there
and you just dont give a care
with a spilff in one hand
and a can in the other
come to reality mother

by demi buxton

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Coreena Dejesus 19 April 2009

This is very good... it flows so smoothly... sad poem hugs cc

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Justice For All 19 April 2009

it was very good10+++

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~ Jon London ~ 15 June 2009

Deep insight into the many plagues of life..and what future damage it can cause to those around you.....very well penned....you're wise beyond your years dear Demi....keep exploring

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Myrtle Thomas 29 April 2009

It sounds like you have a real head on your shoulders.A very good poem to be written by a girl your age.Very very good.By the way thanks for reading one of mine

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It seems you have more sense than others, there will always be people who will value you and you will find them, we never know what is around the corner of life.GBBS

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my tyoung friend, I pray this is not your fate. If so, I pray that she does coem to reality.. along with all the moms liek her out there.

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Melissa Pelletier 19 April 2009

Difficult content, conveyed with dexterity and grace, well done.

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