Comfertably Numb Poem by lilly mandrell

Comfertably Numb

Rating: 3.0


I have become comfertably numb
I can feel no pain.
The smile I wair is painted on
The laugh I force its fake.

I have become pleasntly detached
I can hold no joy.
I may be hear in body
But not in mind.

I have become adequatly apathetic
I no longer no how to feel.
My life is now an outline
No deatale within.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sameer Ahmed 08 April 2009

A very intangible and nonconcrete emotions are the essence of the poem...10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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Aiden Florence 03 April 2009

As abstract as it may be, the flow makes it a wonderful piece.

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