Coming Of Dark Poem by Smoky Hoss

Coming Of Dark

Rating: 5.0


A smoking darkness at end of
day
has fallen down
upon the deep blue

sky. It lingers in ribbons hanging
gray
and continues along
determined to make someone

cry. No moon so bright tonight will hearts
stir
only faint stars singing
with a shallow and lonesome

sigh. Not a thing moves nor
purrs
even owls simply watch and listen
refusing to

fly. This extremely dark
night
shall wither the spirit
filling the mind with shadows of fitful

fright.

Tuesday, July 30, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: fear,night
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
- experimenting with different styles
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juan Olivarez 07 August 2013

Interesting poem In style I mean. Kinda unique good one too.

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Joseph Anderson 05 August 2013

Smoky-That is an unusual style in this, but you have vividly painted a spooked night with amazing use of imagery and a blending of all nightly things. I am gonna skip my nightly walk,

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Valerie Dohren 02 August 2013

Excellent Smoky, had a bit of a dabble myself of late with more modern formats. This is very good, a great read. Looking forward to more.

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Dave Walker 30 July 2013

A wonderful poem Smoky, a great write.

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