Commitment Poem by Sandra Osborne

Commitment

Rating: 2.4


Love me tonight,
She said,
Like a flower wavering
In a cool summers breeze.

There must be no commitments here,
He said,
Thus we insure
No rejection, no fear.

Love me tonight,
She said,
Like a plea to belong
To a world that doesn’t exist.

I must always be free,
He said.
You are just
A thing to me.

She smiled,
As her dreams of love
Slipped into the silver black
Ocean of non-reality.


Confidently, he leaned over
And touched her shoulder;
Kiss me girl,
He said.

She just stared at him
From the distance of stars,
And laughed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lost Poet 01 November 2009

really gr8 work dear....... keep it up...

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