Nicholas Wayde Turner


Commitment


Today was our day
We laughed, cried, and had a time
Five months ago at this spot
We committed on the dot
We’ve disagreed and bickered in the past
But now we know our commitments going to last
I can’t wait until we say “I do”
Because after that day, we’ll be playing Pica boo

Submitted: Thursday, May 02, 2013
Edited: Monday, October 14, 2013
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My partner and I have had lots of insecurities, so I wrote this poem to show him I 'm not going anywhere.

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Allen Steble (5/17/2013 8:38:00 PM)

    Great poem here youve summed up to your feelings nicely in a few lines keep it up and 10 (Report) Reply

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