Tirupathi Chandrupatla


Computer Down (2q Poem) - Poem by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Why close the shop
'Cause computer
Went down?

Why run into loss
Unable to handle
Numbers by hand?

(2Q poem: Basically two questions with a simple structure)


Comments about Computer Down (2q Poem) by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

  • Gold Star - 35,597 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/20/2013 8:01:00 PM)

    we are really slave in one way or other, beautiful write, salute.10 (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,228 Points Thomas A Robinson (6/20/2013 12:29:00 PM)

    Ha! It has become so we have to have the computer's permission to do anything. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 56 Points Vijay Sai R (6/19/2013 11:02:00 PM)

    computer becomes in such situation, boon or bane! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (6/19/2013 2:57:00 PM)

    we are so dependent on the computer. when it is down we are at a loss. nice (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,714 Points Neela Nath (6/19/2013 10:00:00 AM)

    Very relevant topic.Loved. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,201 Points Shahzia Batool (6/19/2013 1:14:00 AM)

    yes, we are so dependent, and it has revolutionised life so much that the difference between progress and regress is going to end! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 24,732 Points Valsa George (6/18/2013 11:40:00 PM)

    In this computer age how man is made a cog in the machine! We are unable to function without the help of an automation!
    What a pity! A salient question! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 5, 2014


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