Treasure Island

hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Condone all crimes

Say no words of regret
Just internally repent
As you were heavenly sent
Not for merry making time to be spent

You were only allowed
To be sincerely followed
All his commands within limit
“Love to all when time came to greet”

You exhausted all ample chances
They were given at once
To wake up in time
And improve upon with passage of time

There were hindrances
With lots of hardships
I knew you may error
Yet it was granted with honor

Now at the last leg of journey
You are calling me as “Almighty”
Filled with grief as last resort
To escape result when time came to report

Not prayers alone were needed
The commands too could have been heeded
You were aware of the consequences
But waited in futile for the chances

“Oh dear child, you are all forgiven”
You knew life was uncertain and end may be sudden
Remember only one thing at a time
“ kindness at heart and love” will condone all crimes

Submitted: Friday, July 19, 2013
Edited: Friday, July 19, 2013

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/19/2013 10:55:00 PM)

    Juwita Heart likes this.

    Juwita Heart - -

    Content like this;
    all available
    stay malakukan
    up to date
    what we need
    consequences that we will receive
    not on the content in Klick not know
    reminded that trap Batman in cobwebs
    it may be spam
    to be honest we should have
    anti virus
    and avoid sites that will tempt
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/19/2013 10:09:00 PM)

    Maria Jaqueline Singlan Sosa, Adje B. Mudiaga and Poetess Shalini like this.

    Poetess Shalini Lovely lines sir! ! !
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/19/2013 8:10:00 AM)

    Hisham Addicoat44 minutes ago
    The Hell exists, its doors are sealed for now, but one day 7 will open and then all will be filled.
    Comment +1
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