Confession Poem by Sandra Feldman

Confession

Rating: 4.8


Without your eyes where will I go?
All Love is in them, and I know,
That if our lives are worth a go,
It's Love that makes all Passions grow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Pendleton 22 February 2013

good lines. I think I may have made it more vertical with only 2 or 3 words per line, to give it more power. good one tho

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Varsha M 25 January 2021

A wise and beautiful confession. So well written and expressed.

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Bri Edwards 25 January 2021

I just checked definitions of 'passion' and, sure enough, passion is not just reserved for reference to love or . : )

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Bri Edwards 25 January 2021

I liked the shape and rhyming, but am not so keen about the poem. Of course i look down my nose often at love poems (not all of them!) . bri ;)

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 06 September 2014

Short and sweet, yet deep in meaning! I like it.

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Khairul Ahsan 07 July 2013

It's Love that makes all Passions grow. Indeed! A short, beautiful poem any lover would love to read again and again.

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