(December 29,1987 / Omaha, Nebraska)

Confessions of a Bound Soul

Brother, my brother,
How selfish was I
While you seemed to struggle,
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  • Cherish Janis (10/5/2011 6:34:00 AM)

    loved it. makes me think of my bro! miss him soooo much! add me!

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  • Christopher Fox (11/5/2008 4:04:00 PM)

    What a beautiful poem. I can almost completely relate to the entire piece. You did a great job at writing a poem that was simple and engaging.

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  • Brent Irving (6/14/2008 3:33:00 AM)

    ur last verse, touched me in a way no poem about brothers has, as i have been away from my brother many times but not aslong as this. i am young and turn to poems to help me get through the rougher times. great fukn poem. lovely verse

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  • Judy Rodriguez (2/25/2008 11:52:00 AM)

    Wow this poem made me think and evaluate the relationship I have with my younger brother and it made me kind of sad to try and relate to this. I can sense much love in those lines accompanied by hurtful reminice. Yet, it is alll just beautiful

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  • Samantha Cicchini (1/24/2008 8:47:00 PM)

    I think this is really beautiful. The language is not too overbearing and it just holds so much emotion. I really loved it.

    Were you inspired by Fullmetal Alchemist?

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