......Confetti Of Evolution Poem by elysabeth faslund

......Confetti Of Evolution

Rating: 5.0


Confetti of the Serengeti
Rained up, down,
Diagonal...
Intracacies spiraling
Granite to sandstone...

To Life, before fang
Claw...
Miasma's prints
Imprinting survival
Mutations...

Kenya...Olduvai...
Staged basins
From the Earth.

What price?
What eyes closed...
Opened
Eons later to
Triumphs' confetti?

A door shut behind
Me.
I opened the window.

Was this how all
Happened?
The stage. The play...
The acts?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 02 August 2008

Unusual piece Elysabeth and yet woven so well. It is impressive and gets better and better the more you read it. Lovely write. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Ian Bowen 02 August 2008

Elysabeth, well penned piece of work. Ian

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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