Confusion Poem by Casey O'Sheridan

Confusion



Confusion

My mind is racing
A constant Déjà vu
Continuous delirium
Not knowing what to do

Do I love you? Do I hate you?
Do I really care?
Do I stay? Can I go?
Would I really even dare?

Always unloading their problems
They are never happy
Always expecting a smile
Want me to be so damn sappy

I need to get out of here
I just need to go
Somewhere far far away
Where the real me nobody knows

A chance to start over
I’ll be gone again in a month or two
When those people start to use me
I’ll go again to start anew

Far away from my friends and family
They won’t know me anymore
Refusing to let anyone in
Protected to my core

I won’t let them in
They cannot see
I’ll be all alone
Can anyone help me?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 08 February 2009

Boy! This is a heavy situation. There is a lot underneath that needs to be fleshed out. The writing is rather direct but the underlying message is missing somewhere along the way. All that is clear, is that help is needed for this poor girl. The structure is fine, it's all in the content. GW62

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Subbaraman N V 12 November 2008

Nothin need to be taken so seriously in life! We have to learn to live with the realities of life! No scope for any confusion!

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