Confusion Poem by alibbebeth holyoake

Confusion



the looks on your face
the words on your lips
the thoughts on your mind
that you`ll never think

you started your life
with so much hope
wih so much joy
how could it end so sad

coz you took your life
brought yourself to the end
how could you do that
you said you were my friend

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
jessica lee gregory 24 June 2008

thats is so true... but sometimes people do that cause they think that they have nothing to live for. but in the end the other person has to suffer. great job

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 March 2008

sometimes....life is so complicated

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Jerry Hughes 28 February 2008

Ali people do what they want to do, you'll have to accept that fact...

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