Consequences Of Hate And Selfishness Poem by Mara SalvatruchaDemon

Consequences Of Hate And Selfishness



i want the spotlight like Louis Armstrong
got no idea were i belong
is it in prison, battlefield or dead
all i can go is stay strong
i was born deep below
but not Australia like Russell Crowe
talking about deeper then the dirt
place so hot you can't even wear pants and t-shirts
my god my heart and mind begin to hurt
why was i put here
i heard a voice say you rebelled from halakhah, sharia, Ten Commandments
my eyes begin to bleed
my soul was full of Affrightment
i stood amongst men as there teeth cracked
columns of bodies were stacked
i watched in amaze as demons reenacted
the day they fallen to earth
why was i so unafraid of death and Consequences
why was i so selfish and hateful
all my dreams don't matter anymore
didn't even fall in love nothing to explore

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Appleblossoms 2009 08 April 2009

You were already catching my attention until I read this line 'but not Australia like Russell Crowe'....this made it poor, I believe.

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Cerys Grant 07 April 2009

Wow! This cuts quite deeply! Vivid imagery, I enjoyed reading this poem!

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