Consumption Poem by Jhanus Thanatos

Consumption

Rating: 5.0


What is this I see,
This white void,
Trying to consume me,

I run, I hide,
I can't get away,
Sanity denied,
Death comes out to play,

My darkness is white,
This blackness is light,
Salvation out of sight,
What will end this dreadful night?

Consuming my brain,
Enducing my pain,
I've gone completly insane,
This denied sanity I must regain,

The blood trickles down,
It makes a gentle dripping sound,
I'm unable to frown,
This smile scares everyone around,

To be a rejected,
To be a freak,
To being consumed and neglected,
To being tortured for being weak.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tj Becker 17 September 2008

I keep messing this up haha Not sure what I'm doing. Just wanted you to know this is a great poem and the below is a powerful stanza that I can relate to: Consuming my brain, Enducing my pain, I've gone completly insane, This denied sanity I must regain, -- really well done. and if this is a duplicate just delet me haha..I have no clue how I keep messing up.

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