(10/27/1950 / Fort Riley, KS)

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Contrails

With my Navajo friend Johnny,
Sitting on a dune of red sand
In Monument Valley, Utah,
And partaking in a little cotraband
Whiskey, we gazed up high,
Squinting in the air toward the sun
Where there was the vapor trail
Of a jumbo jet.

'Where are all those people
'Havin' to go? ' he asked.
'Packed up like those fishies,
Those, um, sardines in a can.'
Told him I did not know.
We rolled cigarettes
And enjoyed being landbound,
Down in the dumps,
Not double-daring gravity
And the jackrabbit horizon.

Submitted: Monday, October 01, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, October 02, 2012


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  • Elena Sandu (10/11/2012 5:01:00 PM)

    Amazing write. The imagery is very alive and quite interesting how in such a few words you have connected worlds! Monument Valley, man under wide sky, a sea world (in a tight can, lol that could be the human soul) , and jackrabbit horizon. I cannot believe such beauty to be depressing? Could the friends be disconnected?

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  • Poetheart (going) (10/3/2012 2:01:00 PM)

    I saw the image of the trail in the sky, friends having fun! beautiful

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