Ellen Greene


Cool Girls - Poem by Ellen Greene

Cool Girls

Cool girls standing there
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is basically a statement about how the cool girls in school may think that they are above it all and better than everyone else but in reality no one actually likes them

Comments about Cool Girls by Ellen Greene

  • Rookie - 16 Points Calico Jack (4/23/2012 10:33:00 AM)

    The last three stanzas are just perfect. Great rhythm great rhyme, just plain great! You seem to really switch your tone and rhythm after the first two stanzas which is fine, but you might do well to wright another poem with them and dropp them from this poem, if only to improve the flow. (Report) Reply

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