a cool moon today I see
though a lonesome view she is
alone she is not
accompanying me along the way
enchanting my eyes,
basking in its beauty
while in my view
my companion she will be
until I arrive at my destination
then her loneliness will prevail
mockingly,
in parallel to mine
I am certainly impressed and wondering where you have gone. Such an incredibly refreshing and soul-familiar style of writing you have.... I love this....
Here we see the poet's love for nature which does not digest the idea of moon going lonesome or him deprived of the company of moon. Pleased to read it. Thanks.
The moon is personified as a companion to a lonely traveler who does not feel alone anymore, I like the style employed here awesome.
Seeing the moon as a companion - so close yet so far - is an incredible metaphor. A beautiful poem that touches the core of the readers' heart. Thank you for penning down such wonderful lines..
Very nice. A moon is a better companion at night. Liked it.
Well written, Anna. Congratulations on having it chosen as poem of the day!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like clarity and this piece has that. Though it is not a satisfaction to experience a lonely moon. It was pleasant to hear someone describe one. GW62