Anna Pacheco

Rookie - 44 Points (1962 / Miami, FL)

Cool Moon Traveling - Poem by Anna Pacheco

a cool moon today I see
though a lonesome view she is
alone she is not
accompanying me along the way
enchanting my eyes,
basking in its beauty

while in my view
my companion she will be
until I arrive at my destination
then her loneliness will prevail
mockingly,
in parallel to mine


Comments about Cool Moon Traveling by Anna Pacheco

  • Anil Kumar Panda (12/1/2015 9:33:00 PM)


    Very nice. A moon is a better companion at night. Liked it. (Report) Reply

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  • (12/1/2015 1:15:00 PM)


    Well written, Anna. Congratulations on having it chosen as poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • (12/1/2015 11:56:00 AM)


    Nice poem.Elements of nature are always a comfort. (Report) Reply

  • (12/1/2015 8:04:00 AM)


    So happy to read this again Anna.... (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/1/2015 7:51:00 AM)


    Great metaphor and nice imagery in your poem.... (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/1/2015 7:08:00 AM)


    A companion is needed in life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (12/1/2015 2:41:00 AM)


    Seeing the moon as a companion - so close yet so far - is an incredible metaphor. A beautiful poem that touches the core of the readers' heart. Thank you for penning down such wonderful lines.. (Report) Reply

  • Kinyua Karanja (12/1/2015 1:46:00 AM)


    The moon is personified as a companion to a lonely traveler who does not feel alone anymore, I like the style employed here awesome. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (12/1/2015 1:38:00 AM)


    Here we see the poet's love for nature which does not digest the idea of moon going lonesome or him deprived of the company of moon. Pleased to read it. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • (8/13/2015 10:58:00 AM)


    I am certainly impressed and wondering where you have gone. Such an incredibly refreshing and soul-familiar style of writing you have.... I love this.... (Report) Reply

  • (8/3/2008 7:38:00 PM)


    I like clarity and this piece has that. Though it is not a satisfaction to experience a lonely moon. It was pleasant to hear someone describe one.

    GW62
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 14, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 16, 2011


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