Dog goD 8Hate

Rookie - 477 Points (Grass Valley, Ca.)

Coraopolis - Poem by Dog goD 8Hate

Oh yes, Coraopolis ... curious old town,
once wore a fine suit ... white shirt ...
tie, it was all so ... 'suitable'.... Well ...
that was until assumed harmonies
played on irony's farcical flute
and a tune too distant a key.

Appeased men once walked those now ...
worn ... threatened ... grieving old roads ...
it's a castigating view ...
they punish ... a sensible
eye ....

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Comments about Coraopolis by Dog goD 8Hate

  • Veteran Poet - 1,323 Points Xelam Kan™ (7/31/2014 1:32:00 PM)

    inspired... the dots and line breaks work superbly, especially the 2nd stanza. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 27, 2014



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