((((((((((((((((((Cosmic Canopy))))))))))))))))) Poem by Dr subhendu kar

((((((((((((((((((Cosmic Canopy)))))))))))))))))

Rating: 3.1


cosmic canopy spreads over offspring,
the eternal spring of love and bliss
courses upon the lap of tranquilitry
mother when mothering yet unequalled

dream of love comes true across her half muffled veil
light of resplendence diffuses across the life
solace irresistible by the gleams from heaven
real gem, the rarest of all rare on earth

inflaming within in one’s life as enligtened
love finds its own genesis from mother’s womb
no words, no prayer even no words of worship
yet match her depth of shelter of repose divine

breath looks back fastest by remniscence
I still remember the halcyon days of yore
starry eyes of innocence by her love virgin
pierce the tears by her holy holster of hand

I am speechless to her flawless care
yet by the blood of immortal caresses
words sanguine of crystal wisdom
unflinching support from subterranean truth
as when anchored by her love epitomised
trudging breath yet follows her guidance eternal

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew Lunel 07 January 2010

wonderful. loved the play with words

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Tsira Goge 24 October 2008

Fine and very scale poems... The boundless feeling therefrom flows...10 from me, subhendu.. Best wishes, Tsira

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Mimzy Sue 08 October 2008

This poem is amazing.... I have no words, you know how to say it. i say more than 10

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Anjali Sinha 04 October 2008

a beautiful tribute to motherhood. Blessed be all mothers! ! ! ! ! you Dr Kar -are special to words so apt- these just flow from yur mind and heart. i loved this poem +++10 and regards anjalie this goes to my fav list.

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Thad Wilk 28 September 2008

A wonderful poem and tribute to motherhood Dr. Kar! A delightful read ! ! Best wishes! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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