Count On Her To Stay Poem by Aldo Kraas

Count On Her To Stay

Rating: 3.3


Count on her to stay
Here
Count on her love
Count on her prayers
Count on her to tell me about what she wants more
Count on her to sing
Count on her to show her happiness to me
Count on her to find out how beautiful she is
Count on her to find out that I need her
Count on her to find out that there is a place that she lay down and Closed her eyes
Count on her to find out that there is a crack in the mirror
Count on her to find out that the light outside is bright
Count on her to find out what is her world outside
Count on her to find out that she needs me
Count on her to find out that she needs to explore her world
Count on her teardrops falling down
Count on her feelings that is inside her heart
Count on her sweet memories

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
* Sunprincess * 14 July 2014

...............sometimes we wonder if we can count on the ones we love....nice write...

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 18 December 2006

Though capsuled in an air of mystique, and poetically succinct, these 14 words have so many paths, for the Reader to sojurn on...Nicely done... F.J.R.

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Aldo Kraas

Aldo Kraas

Sao Paulo Brazil
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