Countdown Poem by Rokket Grrl

Countdown

Rating: 5.0


10 people in our crowd
Who played into our chemistry
But we can't be separated
By anybody

9 things in common that makes
Us so complete
That makes me smile as we hold
Hands and walk along the street

8 dates that made my love
For you more intense
And changed my view and made
Being alone make no sense

7 sleepless nights staying
Up thinking of you
Then finally falling asleep and
Dreaming things I wish were true

6 times I thought this love
Had faded into the sky
And I thought I was finally free
To spread my wings and fly

5 reasons you should love me
They are very clear
Come a little closer and I'll 
Whisper them in you ear

4 chances you've had
To make me yours
But you just shot them down
And closed all those doors

3 ways to love a girl
Who needs a boy like you
And wishes she could make others
Love her, like you do

2 broken hearts, shattered
In this fight
Keeping me up crying
Every single night

1 boy in the world who could 
Make me feel like flying
And can change the way I feel
When I feel like crying

0 reasons to change who you are 
For this girl who loves you so
And zero reasons for you to
Ever let me go

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 19 June 2011

Great poem. Nice sentiments. Skilfully conceived. Rich in imagery. I liked it. A fine 10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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