Countryside (Senryu) Poem by Govind Ramakrishnan

Countryside (Senryu)



long and winding road
with tall trees on either side ~~
a grey porsche speeds by

© 2016

Sunday, July 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gil Highlander 24 July 2016

Kelly is right, he probably missed the beauty of the countryside. A good senryu that captures the moment well.

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Kelly Kurt 24 July 2016

The rich owner not capable of taking in the richness of the beautiful scenery

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Guru Kothandaraman 24 July 2016

Sounds like the country side, speeding race cars on quiet roads.

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