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where is courage?
I believe in courage
it is with in you
you can not see it
courage is something
that you feel with in you
A person with strenght
and courage is a majority
of other.
justin kamara
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Wednesday, February 28, 2007 |
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Monday, January 24, 2011 |
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Alicia Patti (2/28/2007 11:33:00 AM)
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This is very good, Justin. Your hard work is paying off. You need to make 'with in' one word, as 'within.' The following word is spelled wrong: 'strenght.' Please look it up. You can leave off the last line entirely, because it does not add to the poem.
Otherwise I enjoyed reading this.
Keep on studying.
alicia
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