justin kamara


Courage - Poem by justin kamara

where is courage?
I believe in courage
it is with in you
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Comments about Courage by justin kamara

  • Rookie Alicia Patti (2/28/2007 11:33:00 AM)

    This is very good, Justin. Your hard work is paying off. You need to make 'with in' one word, as 'within.' The following word is spelled wrong: 'strenght.' Please look it up. You can leave off the last line entirely, because it does not add to the poem.

    Otherwise I enjoyed reading this.

    Keep on studying.

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