...Cow Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

...Cow

Rating: 5.0


eyes,
that grope for a meaning,
to seek the universe in itself,

womb,
possessing all the gods.

aura,
of a temple-shrine.

rhythm,
of motherly love.

seen eating polythene bags,
in the corridors of adversity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 02 July 2009

sarvesh...what do you want me to comment on such a gentle yet firm message...

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Priyanka Bhowmick 02 July 2009

a good msg portrayed in a different way, ... nice 1.

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Kesav Easwaran 02 July 2009

very nice...both the symbol used and the truth behind...creative work Sarvesh...10

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Maitreyee Joshi 02 July 2009

a very significant statement given in a wonderful manner.thanks10

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Ankita Sharma 12 March 2010

woo...I personally used to think that the cows meditate But I don't know the truth I wonder why they look meditative....

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Adi Cox 10 July 2009

I do like this poem but the last two lines especially. seen eating polythene bags, in the corridors of adversity. With such a wild imagination you seem to have an extra facility than most people. I think any corridor would become the corridor of adversity if you ate polythene bags there. This poem makes me smile.10/10.

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Anjali Sinha 10 July 2009

awwwwwwwhhhhh HOLY COW -10 Anjali

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Ritty Patnaik 09 July 2009

always thought cows have beautifull black, colarium eyes, always sad though! the poem is short and sweet, with strong message.great job.

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Catrina Heart 06 July 2009

symbolic poem written you have captured its very essence...10

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