Bri Edwards

Gold Star - 10,594 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

Crabicide: Who Hides From It? ........ [cooking; Partners; Murder; Humor? ] - Poem by Bri Edwards

As a kid I experienced “frozen fish sticks” and tuna (from a can) , but

lately I’ve tasted lots of seafood types. My wife is from Japan.
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

this really happened along pacific ocean coast of northern california, at our new home. i only altered a tiny bit of the story.

Comments about Crabicide: Who Hides From It? ........ [cooking; Partners; Murder; Humor? ] by Bri Edwards

  • Rookie - 0 Points Allen Steble (5/17/2013 8:33:00 PM)

    I loved this Bri was very funny and bright made me smile' thnx for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 27,704 Points Valsa George (5/14/2013 12:11:00 AM)

    Oh! I can't help laughing my guts out! You are too good at this waggish humour! But I don't understand why your wife burst into tears! I see two crabs with pincer legs menacingly crawling through the blind alley of your intestines! ! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,325 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (5/8/2013 11:12:00 PM)

    Aha u rock with dis scintillating swell rhymed crabicide narrative. Had a nice laugh. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,896 Points Gajanan Mishra (4/30/2013 1:04:00 PM)

    Good presentation. thanks. (Report) Reply








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