Speed!
Weathered
Slippery roads
High speed
Popped a wheel
Tyre burst
Screech driver shocked
Trying to stabilize the car
Breaks screech
Screams from side-walk
Collision
Pile up crash-crash
Glass shattered scattered
Screams squashed fleas
Running feet
Police sirens
Ambulance
Cars stopping
Check out this metal mess
1,2,3 car pile-up crash
Painful moans
Face bashed
In smashed windscreen
Nose broken
Blood oozing
H-e-l-p!
Petrol running
Race against time
Bystanders praying
Rescue workers
Jaws of life!
Hello Poe'TESS, Marvelous display of words! I jotted many poems with words making sounds of cracking sound when our teeth break chocolate. I wonder how you emulated here. however, hope yr car journey ends safe....... With due respect......... H*** Glass shattered scattered Screams squashed fleas sounds well.
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I would like to translate this poem
1,2,3 car pile-up crash------great metaphors in those simple lines, a lot conveyed in brevity