persian khushi

Rookie - 103 Points (kashmir)

Crash Bang


Speed!
Weathered
Slippery roads
High speed
Popped a wheel
Tyre burst
Screech driver shocked
Trying to stabilize the car
Breaks screech
Screams from side-walk
Collision
Pile up crash-crash
Glass shattered scattered
Screams squashed fleas
Running feet
Police sirens
Ambulance
Cars stopping
Check out this metal mess
1,2,3 car pile-up crash
Painful moans
Face bashed
In smashed windscreen
Nose broken
Blood oozing
H-e-l-p!
Petrol running
Race against time
Bystanders praying
Rescue workers
Jaws of life!

Submitted: Wednesday, October 03, 2012

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Form:


Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poet's Notes about The Poem

02/10/12

Comments about this poem (Crash Bang by persian khushi )

  • Rookie - 127 Points Allemagne Roßmann (10/7/2012 4:23:00 PM)

    1,2,3 car pile-up crash------great metaphors in those simple lines, a lot conveyed in brevity (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 831 Points Harindhar Reddy (10/3/2012 2:08:00 PM)

    Hello Poe'TESS, Marvelous display of words! I jotted many poems with words making sounds of cracking sound when our teeth break chocolate. I wonder how you emulated here. however, hope yr car journey ends safe....... With due respect......... H***
    Glass shattered scattered Screams squashed fleas sounds well. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yoonoos Peerbocus (10/3/2012 6:33:00 AM)

    jaws of life-nice inversion of -jaws of death/interestingly set (Report) Reply

Read all 3 comments »

Famous Poems

  1. Phenomenal Woman
    Maya Angelou
  2. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  3. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  4. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  5. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  6. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  7. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
    Maya Angelou
  8. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  10. A Dream Within A Dream
    Edgar Allan Poe
Trending Poets
Trending Poems
  1. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  2. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  3. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  4. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  5. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  6. Annabel Lee, Edgar Allan Poe
  7. If, Rudyard Kipling
  8. Fire and Ice, Robert Frost
  9. A Dream Within A Dream, Edgar Allan Poe
  10. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
[Hata Bildir]