Creases Of His Mind Poem by Linda Hepner

Creases Of His Mind

Rating: 5.0


Hidden in the creases of his mind
are words, each word a key,
key to a dusty trunk
of treasures, some long ignored
until a recollection, clear, persistent,
an electronic ray,
pops the lid wide open
or until
curious fingers prise,
eyes wide, amazed.

Open on the creases of his face
are thoughts, each thought a rail
rail to a distant land
of pleasures, some long suppressed
until an evocation, small, relentless,
a radar signal,
rouses dormant pain
and becomes
paintbrush on the face,
eyes creased, amazed.

LRH
12.14.07

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raynette Eitel 15 December 2007

Linda, this is crafted so well. What a metaphor...and how splendidly you gave it to us. The ending line of each stanza pairs up beautifully. I love this. Raynette

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Lamont Palmer 14 December 2007

Mmmmmm yummy. Enjoyed it. - LP

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