Create Me A World Poem by Ben Partenay

Create Me A World

Rating: 4.8


Create me a world with words my dear,
with pen and hand.
Where we can read love on river bed so clear,
written in sand.

Verses you create with ease my dear,
but without song.
Your words of love were carried off I fear,
and now are gone

For water falls and falling rain it seems,
are beautiful.
But to the falling drops and raging streams,
so horrible.

So slowly your created words wash out,
love from the riverbed.
Leaving love to flurry, fly like doves,
fleeing with dread.

Like all created worlds before, they,
fade to dust.
Leaving ne'er a word to say
about us.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jennifer Marie 27 June 2008

i will always love this one :)

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Sandra Fowler 20 November 2006

How true it is that moods and feelings have the power to create their own worlds. Beautiful work, Ben. Warm regards, Sandra

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Prasanna Kumari 19 November 2006

you made the flow of love beautiful with the flow of your words...

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Ernestine Northover 07 July 2006

This is delightful Ben, it flows like the river, gently and caressingly. Precious words, floating in the water, floating away, never to be seen again. How sad. Love Ernestine XXX

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