Poetheart (back)

(05/23/1960 / Rio de Janeiro)

Creator&Creature


Lower my head
entwine my hair
in my face of marble

As you did

undress all my silks
and some cotton
kiss my neck

as you like

Do not touch me I remain
look,
Lifeless there,

creator and creature

hopelessly

trace with your fingers
giving me life
the silhouette on my back
slowly and cautiously

Draw my form
with his hands and
take them to lips
Kiss

I'm your dream
or
your illusion
Created and now

Alive.

Submitted: Thursday, March 07, 2013

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  • Ramesh Rai (11/23/2013 3:42:00 AM)

    You are one of the best creation of the great creator. i adore your emotion. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (3/16/2013 10:58:00 PM)

    I agree with all comments below, but then what i am going to comment? oh yes one thing..it has an original and very Mirna style! ..._Soul (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri (3/16/2013 4:47:00 AM)

    so impressive and touching.the ending is really marvelous.the remained silhouette on the sand and kiss as the creator.
    love it 10++~nb (Report) Reply

  • Thomas A Robinson (3/8/2013 4:13:00 AM)

    Very sensual and alluring...hard tk keep my hands off this poem.My mind wants to trace the
    images and follow the silhouettes with my minds eye and mentally touch your places of stone and awaken
    them.Them turn cold stone lips to heat that melts a frozen heart and brings back to life your body and soul. (Report) Reply

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