Cries For Help Part 1 Poem by Jonny Brackney

Cries For Help Part 1

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at the end,
you tend to critique
yourself.
find ways to change, and

perfect yourself.

to become whatever you have to be
to make somebody
want you.

searching for something to fix
when you never knew

it was broken.

but it's not your fault at all.
it's theirs.
yeah, they'll surely tell you that.

but there has to be something!
that wasn't quite
good enough.

then again, i suppose
if they can't love every
flaw

then maybe
they don't deserve you


at all.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scotty Dogg 11 December 2012

If you want to give us a biography of your life, do it in a poetic way. Poetry is about images not thoughts. Just thinking out loud here. No offense intended. Haven't heard from you in a while. How's the barn?

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William Marion 13 June 2012

loved it. Im still very new to all this but that was impressive, thank you.

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Jonny Brackney

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Louisville, Kentucky
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