Crimson Velvet Of Passion Poem by Fiona Davidson

Crimson Velvet Of Passion



Eyes meet and connect
Reaching out across miles
That stand fast between us
Come. hold out your heart
Let me take it from you
Dance with it across the stars
Against a backdropp filled
With sparkling diamonds

Crimson velvet of passion
Swirls around my legs softly
Slowly covering my spirit
With the blush of desire
That spills from your fingers
As you reach to step in time
With the love that sings to me
Of future days and hopes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barbara Terry 03 June 2010

As you reach to step in time With the love that sings to me Of future days and hopes This is the punch line of the whole piece Fi. So romantic and dreamy, as well as surreal again. A lover far away across the miles but you are still connected. This actually made me smile, even though I am in miserable pain. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing sis. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Kym Toohey 09 October 2009

Nice verbal dance around desire.

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Sue Sie 16 September 2009

A Fabulous passionate poem....that enfolds the reader in warmth of love...and comfort....well written with great imagery Sue x

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Premila Patel 14 September 2009

Wonderful Fi..so comforting in its truth.... Hope you're well. Best wishes Premila 10+++

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