Critic's Nightwatch Poem by Gwen Harwood

Critic's Nightwatch

Rating: 3.6


Once more he tried, before he slept,
to rule his ranks of words. They broke
from his planned choir, lolled, slouched and kept
their tone, their pitch, their meaning crude;
huddled in cliches; when pursued
turned with mock elegance to croak

his rival's tunes. They would not sing.
The scene that nagged his sleep away
flashed clear again: the local king
of verse, loose-collared and loose-lipped.
read from a sodden manuscript,
drinking with anyone who'd pay,

drunk, in the critic's favourite bar.
'Hear the voice of the bard!' he bellowed,
'Poets are lovers. Critics are
mean, solitary masturbators.
Come here, and join the warm creators.'
The critic, whom no drink had mellowed,

turned on his heel. Rough laughter scoured
his reddening neck. The poet roared
'Run home, and take that face that soured
your mother's lovely milk from spite.
Piddle on what you cannot write.'
At home alone the critic poured

gall on the poet's work in polished
careful prose. He tore apart
meaning and metaphor, demolished
diction, syntax, metre, rhyme;
called his entire works a crime
against the integrity of art,

and lay down grinning, quick, he thought,
with a great poem that would make plain
his power to all. Once more he fought
with words. Sleep came. He dreamed he turned
to a light vapour, seeped and burned
in wordless cracks where grain on grain

of matter grated; reassumed
his human shape, and called by name
each grain to sing, conducting, plumed
in lightning, their obedient choir.
Dressed as a bride for his desire
towards him, now meek, the poet came.

Light sneaked beside his bed. The birds
began their insistent questioning
of silence, and the poet's words
prompted by daylight rasped his raw
nerves, and the waking world he saw
was flat with prose and would not sing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 12 November 2020

The bond of relationship between a poet and his critic beautifully unveiled. Well deserved modern poem of the day.

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 November 2020

At home alone the critic poured gall on the poet's work in polished careful prose. He tore apart meaning and metaphor, demolished diction, syntax, metre, rhyme; called his entire works a crime against the integrity of art, .../// great write about the artistic activities; yes, poet is poem, artist is artist, has independent intelligence, for their spontaneity they are artist, poet, different from the public; I think it's not wise to critic any poet or artist by as usual law of arts

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Khairul Ahsan 11 November 2020

'Light sneaked beside his bed. The birds began their insistent questioning of silence, and the poet's words prompted by daylight rasped his raw nerves, and the waking world he saw was flat with prose and would not sing.' - Loved these concluding lines. Congratulations on the poem's selection as the 'Modern Poem of the Day'!

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 November 2020

Critics are mean at times! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Gwen Harwood

Gwen Harwood

Taringa, Queensland
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